2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Welcome to my hometown.It is a beautiful coastal city. It's climate is very lovely .It's cool in summer while it's very hot in other city .Many people come here from their city in July and August. You can try some seafood ,it's very delicious.Tsingtao beer's very famous,,you can try some if you like . There are six bathing beach.You can swim in the sea ,walk on the beach with your friends .You can put up a tent and have a good night on beach. Of course ,I'll take you to Bdaguan Scenic Area.There are all kinds of architecture styles from 20 countries in the world. Well ,this is my hometown,a beautiful coastal city.I hope you will like it.