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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升。

用户练习作文:

I don't agree this statement. In my option, it depends on the concrete condition. Judgements can be made by different persons, at different places, at different conditions. Sometimes snap judgments can be trusted, sometimes they can not be trusted. In my opinion, with experiences, in an emergency, an expert can make a snap judgment, and others would rather listen to him and follow him. Though this judgment is snap, it was made by an expert, by a man who everyone trusted, so this judgment can be trusted. On the other hand, if one thing is very important, and bonds with so many persons, once this judgment goes wrong, some bad thing would happen, in this condition, snap judgment will risk a lot. Therefore, all in all, 'Snap judgments can never be trusted. ' This is a wrong point.

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