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First , I would like to visit my grandmother. She is a kind lady and have a lot of wine in his underground. I will stay there for one week Second , I will go summer camping with my best friend Anny. I love summer camping very much and i join in this activity very summer. at last , I should stay home will my father and mother untill the new school day coming. What about your summer plan ? Hope to hear soon.
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