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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

As is universally known,a individual's good apearance plays an inportant role in leaving a pleasant impression on others.Nobody can deny that a man who dresses decently and also is handsome has more opportunities to get a job. However judging somebody just by his appearance is unjustified and unfair.What really counts is the abilities ,talents and gifts. Confusion,known as a greatest philosopher,has been highly emulated by people all over the world.However he has a extremely werid look-,big forhead,two thick lips and long earlobes. So,it's not hard to come to a conlusion,we can't judge someone just by appearance before we read him thoroughly.

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