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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

As is universally known,an individual's good appearance plays an important role in leaving a pleasant impression on others.Nobody can deny that a man who dresses decently and also is handsome has more opportunities to get a job. Nevertheless judging somebody just by his appearance is unjustified and unfair.What really counts is the abilities ,talents and gifts. Confusion,known as the greatest philosopher,has been highly emulated by people all over the world.However he has an extremely weird look-,big forehead,two thick lips and long earlobes. Accordingly,it's not hard to come to a conclusion,we can't judge someone just by appearance before we read him thoroughly.

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