小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；文章词汇表达较丰富，不过请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

I have a lot of friends,but they are not same,for me ,some friends is really friends,for examle,my mom,also,she is my family,but I can say anthing to her,and I trust she very much since I am child.acutlly,I don't want make she disapper,but I always do it worng,it is a begging to our friendship. I hope I can do something correct to make she happy,so I learn English,just want make she knew I will do my best for she. About her looking ,she has black hair,It's beatiful when I am younger,but now,she is older,so she losing a lot of hair by some reason,her face is not sink any more,when I am grow up,she is grow up. but if god is really,I hope he can make my mom become a younger lady.