小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者在句法层面做的很棒；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好。

I have an army of friends, but they are not same, for me , quite a few friends are really friends, for example —— my mom, also, she is my family, but I can say anything to her, and I trust she very much since I am a child. Actually, I don't want to make her disappointed, but I always do it wrong, it is a betray to our friendship. I hope I can do something to make she happy, so I learn English, I just want to make she know I will do my best for she. About her looks , she has black hair, it's beautiful when I am younger, but now, she is older, so she losing a lot of hair by some reason, her face is not smooth any more, when I am growing up, she is growing up. But if God is real, I hope he can make my mom become a younger lady.