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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇基本功很好,但在高级词汇的积累上还要努力;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。

用户练习作文:

Recently there is a general discussion about whether judging someone just by his appearance is advisable.As far as I am concerned,it's obviously unwise.Here comes the reasons. First and foremost,though we can't deny that we always love to make friends with those who are good-looking or dress decently,innovational thougts and nice personalities are the real indicators of ever-lasting friendship. Secondly,with the science techonologe developing rapidly,sometimes even beautieful look can be fake.Plastic surgery can change individuals' appearance but not develop their virtue. Consequently,we need to look for essence below surface appearance instead of staying at a superficial level

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