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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富。

用户练习作文:

Recently there is a general discussion about whether judging someone just by his appearance is advisable.As far as I am concerned,it's obviously unwise.Here comes the reasons for my opinion. First and foremost,though we can't deny that we always love to make friends with those who are good-looking or dress decently,innovational thoughts and nice personalities are the real indicators of ever-lasting friendship. Secondly,with the science technology developing rapidly,sometimes even delicate look can be fake.Plastic surgery can change individuals' appearance but not develop their virtues. Consequently,we require looking for essence below surface appearance instead of staying at a superficial level

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