小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；高级词汇使用贫乏，注意一下个别拼写错误。

My new teacher is a gril, she is 24 years old, and she looks very active, she loves all sports, she rides the bicycle to go to work, and she climbing at weekend, she told us a lot of notices about sporting, under the infulence of her, I beginning to do some soports although I never do it before. The last sunday, I jogging 5 kilometers, oh, it's very wonderful experience, also it's pain for me, but I think it's a good thing, so when I go to school at yesterday, I told my teacher, and she behaves very happy, and she says that we should have a jogging together when we are free all. I love my new teacher, she brings something new to my life, and I am pleased to accept these.