小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；作者句法基础较为扎实。

My new teacher is a girl, she is 24 years old, and she looks very active, she loves all sports, she rides the bicycle to go to work, and she climbing at weekends, she told us a lot of notices about sporting, under the influence of her, I beginning to do some sports although I never do it before. The last sunday, I jogging 5 kilometers, oh, it's a very wonderful experience, also it's painful for me, but I think it's a good thing, so when I go to school at yesterday, I told my teacher, and she behaves very happy, and she says that we should have a jogging together when we are free all. I love my new teacher, she brings something new to my life and I am pleased to accept these.