托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；作者用词灵活多样，但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people. This kind of topic has been discussed so many times in recent years. But can't say who is right or who is wrong, because that depends what you like, what kind of life do you want to live, some people likes to make firends, to him, living around people is just what they want, to those who like reading or do something alone, they would like living in a raral area. So, in my opinion, this is a good topic for everyone, we all need to find out what we really need. If we change our view to look at this issue, we should find out rural area and downtown area both has their pros and cons. Let's compare them from facility, resource, environment, opportunity, etc. We all know, in city, there're so many efficient, convenient facilities, people who live in the city would benefit from them. Parks, streets, lamps, museums, gyms, these facilities could serve people who live in the city very well. And also, the resource for education, health, you can get it freely, you have so much choices. For those who wanna suceed, city could give them a good condition to let them do what they wanna do. This kind of thing, rural area can not afford. But rural area has its own special merits, it always means quiet, easy, confortable, away from city, oxygen bar, etc. In fact, I both like rural and downtown, because I need them all, I live in the city, I work in the city, I take a rest in rural, that happend in my life. From what I said, we can come up to a conclusion, rural or downtown, you choose what you like, you live what you like.