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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,高级词汇的使用还有很大提升空间。

用户练习作文:

I don't agree with the statement which says 'snap judgments can never be trusted', since this statement is over absolutly.Just like every coin has two sides, snap judgments sometime can be trusted while sometime you can't make your judgments through your snap. Usually,snap judgments can't be trusted because the quick judgment may miss lots of information which can only be discovered after the detailed check.For example,the first time I met my college roommate,the huge figure and the laud voice convinced me that this was a rude man.However,oneday I just found he was reading the traditional book about China's history and culture!What astonished me more was that he had a big knowledgement about the history.This really made me shamed of my snap judgment towards him which resulted in the wrong judgment.You can't judge a person by your snap judgment.Maybe the person's behaviour and appearance may reflect his quality in some way,but his character as well as his habbits can only be found after close look.

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