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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:54浏览次数:2725
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Participating in sports is worthwhile only when you win something.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的。你的看法是?给出具体的原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。

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People live in present. They plan for and worry about the future. History, however, is the story of the past. There is an old saying in China-"Learn from history". It emphasizes the important role of history for current situations. When solving current or future problems, care must be taken not to ignore the past; Because we could learn from the past many valuable lessons helpful for our current or future problems. For example, which way we could keep away from unsuccessful experiences on english study? How to avoid environment pollution ,When we pursue the economic interests? The second reason is that history record of actual events. It can help us deeply understand what happened at any time.

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