2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；从句数量偏少；文中词汇表达灵活多样，高级词汇的使用还需加强。

I will take him to a new museum,where have the record of my hometown's culture civilization.It is show that happe hisory of Chaoshan except being subjected by foreign rule. It get me an assosiation of the development and making improvement in Shantou In some respect . I can feel angre in it by instinct after speak of those hard history when visualzed people shout let then out as if they lose too more family menber.In those years,people have to have their wits about then.