2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

从句数量偏少；语句间的衔接不是很自然；文章词汇表达丰富，若多用高级词汇多检查几遍单词拼写就更好了。

I will take him to a new museum,where have the record of my hometown's culture civilization.It have show happy history of Chaoshan except being subjected by foreign rule. It get me an assosiation of the development and making improvement in Shantou In some respect . I can feel angre in it by instinct after speak of those hard history when visualzed people shout let then out as if they lose too more family menber.In those years,people have to have their wits about then.