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The Dragon Boat festival arise in China for a long time. It was famous for a partriotic poemt whose name is Qu Yuan.Qu Yuan was borned a loyal family. He was intellgent and ambitious. But in that time, there were wars everywhere. He expected to persude the king to take some postive actions against the war. But the king ignored him and punished him, even allocated him far away from his hometown. Qu Yuan was very upset. Then he left his hometown with broken heart. When he arrived at a river, an badly idea came from his mind--he want to jump into the river and die. Unfortunally, he did it. He was so gernerous and respective, people can not bear this bad news and they can not allow the fish to eat Qu Yuan's body, they created a kind of food to sovle the problem. The ''Zongzi"was appeared. In nowadays, people would eat "zongzi" in memory of Qu Yuan. It becomes a symbol of Dragon Boat festival. In addition, some places will hold a game named "Sai Longzhou". That was a groupwork. Each team has equal members and they are knitted together to win the game. The atmosphere was excited and cheerful. The Dragon Boat festival is our traditional festival. It's not only a festival for us to get together with our family or friends but also a treasure left from our ancestor. It warned us must to be a partriotic person and taught us have to cherish our present life.
