2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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I will take him to a new museum,where have the record of my hometown's culture civilization.It showed happy history of Chaoshan except being subjected by foreign rule. An association of the country and making improvement in Shantou are so hard in some respect . I can feel angre in it by instinct after speak of those hard history when visualzed people shout let then out as if they lose too more family menber.In those years,people have to have their wits about then.