有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;文章词汇表达丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。
I will take him to a new museum,where have the record of my hometown's culture civilization.It showed happy history of Chaoshan except being subjected by foreign rule. Making improvement in Shantou is so hard in some respect . I can feel angre in it by instinct after speak of hard history when visualize people shout let then out as if they lose too more family member.In those years,people have to have their wits about then.