文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。
I will take him to a new museum,where have the record of my hometown's culture civilization.It showed happy history of Chaoshan except being subjected by foreign rule. Making improvement in Shantou is so hard in some respect . I can feel angry in it by instinct after speak of hard history when visualize people shout let then out as if they lose too more family member.In those years,people have to have their wits about then.