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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16947
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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I will take him to a new museum,where have the record of my hometown's culture civilization.It showed happy history of Chaoshan except being subjected by foreign rule. Making improvement in Shantou is so hard in some respect . I can feel angry in it by instinct after speak of hard history when visualize that people shout let then out as if they lose too more family member.In those years,people have to have their wits about then.

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