增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
Hugo is my best friend. Hugo, a yello ski, 15 years, and have two clear eyes. His seat is to near by mine. we away go to paly basketball together. He is very tall and strong, so his skill is very good. His study is nice and he is good at english.