正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
Hugo is my best friend. Hugo, a black ski, 15 years, and has two clear eyes. His seat is to nearby my. we away go to play basketball together. He is very tall and strong, so his skill is very good. His study is nice and he is good at english.