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China is a beautiful and cultural diversity country.You'll find lots of things that is more difficult to understand than any other countries if you look into carefully,but most of foreigners are not familiar with china, so it is necessary to have a indigenous for a better tourism experience.I think it's better to introduce ZheJiang because i was born there. If i had a foreign friend,i would like to take him/her to following two scenic spots.The first is Wuzhen,it has been for several thousands of years.The reason why i put it in my menu is ancient buildings which it has,those architectures contains much historical knowleage,you can comprehend what happened to this town over the long history and that's what history books can not tell.The second is the West Lake where once played many touching story,the legend of White Serpent is one of the most well-known stories,it tells a cruel yet beautiful story,you could hear more stories like this if go and see for yourself. Of course,it's not just the two scenic spots that mentioned in the last paragraph,but i think the most attractive is the two no matter changes over time.
