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I have a lot of friends ,but i want introduce my good friend——ChenChen,She is my good friend ,you could say why it my good friend? Because when i have difficult she will support me,and i have cry she will comfort。however,i can't no her ,I wish her forever and me. Finally,i believe we will have many many a lot of thing in my furture.