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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36951
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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I'd be happy to talk about my good friend Lisa because i think we are very similar of hobbies.we are both like music and always get together to go to the KTV.and its main reason why we could be friends.She's a pretty girl and she has a brown hair, we are exactly difference about appearance,and also include our personality. She's a talkative girl and be good at talk to other people. To be frank,I'd grateful to Lisa,She's my best friend to me,She usually helped me when i couldn't resolve the problems, she will encouraging and teaching me that how to effective to settle issues. In a word,It's a great pleasure to make friends with Lisa.She's a positive and sincere girl.I loved her and best wish with my best friend Lisa.

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