小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累高级词汇；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

today is wednesday and is sunny. A woman is tewnty-nine year old and she has two kids. She is a monther. She started working at the age of eighteen. Working in the HR for nine years. Now, she will tack my place when I quit My working on the whole the same as her. It's very pity. I don't want to be her.