小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

Today is wednesday and is sunny. A woman is tewnty-nine year old and she has two kids. She is a mother. She started working at the age of eighteen. She has been working for nine years. Now, she will take my place when I quit My work is the same as hers. This is a pity. I don't want to be her.