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Dear Officer, I am the applicant of your university for the fall 2017, and already got the decision. However, I received two different kinds of decision from your university. Within the checking portal of application status, it shows the “admit type for web application”, and within the email box, the letter shows reject which is opposite to the former. So I am confused about the two different results, could you please help me to confirm which one is the final decision for my application? And the University of Alabama is really my interesting one, and also I will be quite honored to be a member of your community. I have added these two kinds of documents to the attachment for your consideration, please feel free to check them. Thank you very much for your hard work. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.