2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

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Nowadays more and moer people prefer to travel when they have a holiday.In1995 the number of people travelling is ten thousand,in 2000,about 40 thousand,while in 2005,the number has increased to more than 120 thousand.why is this phenomenon more and more populor?Here are the resons :first ,the most important of all,people 's living level is generelly promoted,so excising the basic expense,they can spend extra money to relax and entertain themselves.