高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

文中从句数量过少；作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

Dear Admissions Officer, I am the applicant Zou Linxi (ID: lzou1) of your university for the fall 2017, and already got the decision. However, I received two different kinds of decision from your university. Within the checking portal of application status, it shows the “admit type for web application”, and within the email box, the letter shows rejection which is opposite to the former. So I am confused about the two different results, could you please help me to confirm which one is the final decision for my application? ​ I am really interested at the University of Alabama, and also I will be quite honored to be a member of your community. I have added these two kinds of documents to the attachment for your consideration, please feel free to check them. Thank you very much for your hard work. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Regards, ​Linxi ID: lzou1 Birthdate: March 6th, 1998 Address: Apartment 502, Unit 2, Building 32, Yangguangyishang, Fangshan District，Beijing，China