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Dear Officer, I am the applicant Zou Linxi (ID: lzou1) of your university for the fall 2017, and already got the decision. However, I received two different kinds of decisions from your university. Within the checking portal of application status, it shows the “admit type for web application”, and within the email box, the letter shows rejection which is opposite to the former one. Thus, I am confused about the two different results, could you please help me to confirm which one is the final decision for my application? I am really interested at the University of Alabama, and also I will be quite honored to be a member of your community. I have added these two kinds of documents to the attachment for your consideration, please feel free to check them. Thank you very much for your hard work. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.