单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;从句数量偏少;语言不流畅。
I supposed to take one of my foreign friend to visit my hometown. I will take him to see the sea in my hometown. My hometown is a beautiful place, it has many fish and seafoods. I am used to taking a walk in the morning. I think it good to take a walk every day.