Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;作者词汇基础不错,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;语言不流畅。
From the date,I know something about the emplement in our society.The date tells us,if a worker has a high knowledge or even than the doctor degree.Their salary will higher than those who are lower level. Throughout the reality,different people holddifferent opinions about education.Some people think that your salary does not depeng on your knowledge,they give us a example,plenty of bosses are lower than their empleyees.However,they earn much than them.As far as I am concerned,your salary maybe not depend on your knowledge,but if you learn more ,your eyesight will widen than before.At the same time,you could learn more the academic ability.At that time ,you maybe meet some good opportunities . So education plays an important role in our life.I believe that if you learn more ,the rate of advantage is bigger than the disadvantage.