2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown ,a little mountain vallege,located southeast of Guizhou province.First, I perfered to introduct its view to my foreign friend. My hometown is surrounded by mountains and covered green plants all the time.its air is always fresh and the sky is blue.You will feel very comfortabl when you be here. second,My foreign friden shall kwons my hometwon's people who are hardworking,friendly,kindly and honesty etc.