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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13015
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分48.5分
评语:

从句使用量不足,应增加从句和复合句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;文章词汇表达较丰富,不过请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

用户练习作文:

Some person says the exchange of one apple and and one apple, you only have an apple, but if you exchange one thought and one thought ,you will have two thoughts. This is the beauty of the exchange of the thought. The ability of thinking one person is limited, but the ability of the many people is no boundary. So that, if we face a severt problem, we can get a better way to solve it. At the same time, the condiction of everyone faced is different, everyone has various life experence, and, if you don't say, nobody will known your problem. Then, you can easily lose your confition, even lose yourself. The world country building will make this condition more corportion, if one country don't make words with others, it will be missed in the word. This is the power of the exchange of the idera. Only if we change our idears with others, we can know ourself and others more clerarly.

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