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拼写做的很棒，高级词汇可适量增加；作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。
The Changes of My Friend My friend is Sam. He is a middle school student. In the past, he liked all kinds of the cartoons, and he had a dreamer that he would be a teamwork in every sport. But he spent all time to watch TV shows, so that he did bad at all his class works and also easily got a cold. He was lucky person. Later, he met a good teacher-Yuehan. The teacher encouraged him to study , helped him to recover the class works and advised him to make more time to study and exercise. His condition was changed fully. Nowadays, he has got a better score and joins a basket ball team. He nearly has no time to watch TV.
