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2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(29)写作:The Changes of My Friend

发布时间:2013-09-12 17:50浏览次数:2526
要求:
假设你是无锡日报English Weekly的小编辑,请以“The Changes of My Friend” 为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。Sam是你的朋友,他是中学生。内容提示见下表:
过去
1.喜欢各种各样的电视节目如:卡通片、运动等
2.所有空闲时间都在看电视,所以不擅长所有学科,还经常生病。
3.后来遇到了一个好老师——约翰。鼓励他要努力学习并帮助他复习功课;建议他要多花时间在学习上并多做锻炼。
现在
已改变了很多,……

注意:

1、短文须包括表格内所有信息,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;

2、省略号处请用自己1-2句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;

3、词数80个左右,短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。


The Changes of My Friend
My friend is Sam. He is a middle school student. In the past, 
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高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。

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The Changes of My Friend My friend is Sam. He is a middle school student. In the past, he liked all kinds of the cartoons, but he also had a dream that he would be a teamwork in every sport. Besides he spent all time watching TV shows, so that he has no time to recover the new class also easily got a cold. As a results, he did bad at all his class works yet he was a lucky person. Later, he met a good teacher who name is Yuehan. The teacher encouraged him to study, helped him to recover the class works and advised him to make more time to study and exercise. Therefore, his condition was changed fully. Nowadays, he has got a better score and joined a basket ball team. He nearly has no time to watch TV.

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