小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher is Lingling ,she is beautiful ,l like her very much . She has a long hair ,she also wear a pair of glasses ,when she teach us ,she is so strict ,and we will listen more careful . Although,she is strict ,we still love her.my new teacher ,my friend,first,last,always.