加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文章词汇不够丰富,但单词拼写要认真检查;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
I live in a very old town which is surrouged by beautiful woods. It is a famous spot. On Sundays. hunge of people come from city to see our town and to thought the woods. visitors have been asked to keep the woods clean and tidy. litters beaskets have been place under the trees. But people still sllow their rubbish everywhere.