2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I live in a very old town which is surrounded by beautiful woods. It is a famous spot. On Sundays. hunge of people come from city to see our town and to thought the woods. visitors have been asked to keep the woods clean and tidy. litters beaskets have been place under the trees. But people still sllow their rubbish everywhere.