2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中从句数量过少；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

I live in a very old town which is surrounded by beautiful woods. It is a famous spot. On Sundays, hundreds of people come from city to see our town and to through the woods. visitors have been asked to keep the woods clean and tidy. litters beaskets have been place under the trees. But people still sllow their rubbish everywhere.