作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;层次分明,但过渡词欠缺。
I live in a very old town which is surrounded by beautiful woods. It is a famous spot. On Sundays, hundreds of people come from city to see our town and to through the woods. Visitors have been asked to keep the woods clean and tidy. litter baskets have been placed under the trees. But people still throw their rubbish everywhere.