文中从句的数量太少;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;文中词汇表达灵活多样,高级词汇的使用还需加强。
I live in a very old town which is surrounded by beautiful woods. It is a famous spot. On Sundays, hundreds of people come from city to see our town and to through the woods. Visitors have been asked to keep the woods clean and tidy. Litter baskets have been placed under the trees. But people still throw their rubbish everywhere. In wenesday, I went for a wallk on the woods. What I saw made me sad. I counted sever old cars. The litter baskets were empty and the ground was covered with paper of ciggert ends, old tiders, empty bottles and rubys tins.