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I live in a very old town which is surrounded by beautiful woods. It is a famous spot. On Sundays, hundreds of people come from city to see our town and to through the woods. Visitors have been asked to keep the woods clean and tidy. Litter baskets have been placed under the trees. But people still throw their rubbish everywhere. In wednesday, I went for a walk on the woods. What I saw made me sad. I counted seven old cars. The litter baskets were empty and the ground was covered with paper of cigatettes ends, old tyers, empty bottles and rubys tins.
