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文中高级词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误；文中从句的数量太少；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。
I live in a very old town which is surrounded by beautiful woods. It is a famous spot. On Sundays, hundreds of people come from city to see our town and to through the woods. Visitors have been asked to keep the woods clean and tidy. Litter baskets have been placed under the trees. But people still throw their rubbish everywhere. In wednesday, I went for a walk on the woods. What I saw made me sad. I counted seven old cars. The litter baskets were empty and the ground was covered with paper of cigarette ends, old tyres, empty bottles and rusty tins. Among the rubbishs. I found a sign which said " Anyone who leaves litter in these woods will be prosecuted.
