雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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With the rapid development of the economy and society, travelling to other countries has captured people's attention recently, which has a tremendous effect on people's daily life. However, is it development a positive or negative effect? In my opinion, the positive effect takes the lead with the improvement of people's life level. First of all, travelling abroad can broaden our citizen's horizen. The citizens in China can go sightseeing in other countries ,which were once mentioned in our books.Then we can broaden our eyes and impress ourselves by the meaningful ways. Furthermore, travelling to other countries can enlarge international culture communication.We can experience the differences between other countries' culture and Chinese traditional culture. To sum up, it can benefit us most and people should be encouraged to travel abroad . At the same time, it makes our leisure time full of beautiful things and abundant experences.