雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文章词汇表达多样请继续保持，也能较准确地使用高级词汇，衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

With the rapid development of the economy and society, travelling to other countries has captured people's attention recently, which has an effect on people's daily life. However, is it developing a positive or negative effect? From my own perspective, the positive effect takes the lead with the improvement of people's living level. First of all, travelling abroad can broaden our citizen's horizon. The citizens in China can go sightseeing in other countries ,which were once mentioned in our books.Then we can broaden our eyes and impress ourselves by the meaningful ways. Furthermore,travelling to other countries can enlarge culture communication. We can experience the differences between other countries' culture and Chinese traditional culture. To sum up,it can benefit us most and people should be encouraged to travel abroad . At the same time, it makes our leisure time full of beautiful things and abundant experiences.