2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误。

over-proteced flower There are two pictures discribing that one flower grow up in a warm house which protect it from rain and thunder,but when the warm house is gone,the flower must face the rain and storm alone,it dead at a minute. those pictures means more than what we looked,in modern society ,more and more childre are vulnerable just as those flowers because of parents' spoiling.It's obvious that these children can't grow up healthly,which gives adults warning that a man can never be a really man before he can work out difficulties alone.Parents should give children the normal careness.