2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；用词灵活多样，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

Over-proteced flower There are two pictures discribe that one flower grows up in a warm house which protect it from rain and thunder, but when the warm house is gone, the flower must face the rain and storm alone,The flowers withered at a short time. Those pictures means more than what we looked, in modern society, an increasing number of children are fragile just as those flowers because of parents' spoiling. It's obvious that these children can't grow up healthily, which gives adults a warning that a man can never be a real man before he can work out difficulties alone. Parents should give children the normal concern.